[Kaleidoscope revision] Colours | 9. If a Seed be Sown

Chapter 9 of Colours (the first "book" of Kaleidoscope) has been revised and is now up at FanFiction.net.

Kaleidoscope (I): Colours
9. If a Seed be Sown (3460 words | PG)
   [also on FF.N] [original LJ version: Friends, at metamorfic_moon]

Tonks has almost given up hope that Remus will ever see her as more than a friend, until Sirius steps in to do what he can for his friends. But no one expects the evening to end the way it does.

• What has changed: New title (formerly “Friends”). Some exposition-y paragraphs have been removed, since the information isn’t needed if this chapter is read in its place in the series sequence. Some of the details of the developing relationship between Remus and Tonks have been slightly altered to bring things into line with the (more recently written) preceding chapters, especially Words Unspoken. A little more emphasis has been put on how Sirius is going to react if he hears that Harry is in trouble. And the ending of the chapter has been elaborated a little.

( Tonks tapped her wand along the front door of number twelve, Grimmauld Place... )

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