Thanks for the kind words! I know I was taking a chance with the repetition of that breathe all the way through the chapter, but I wanted a way to show the Remus was basically keeping himself from completely breaking down through sheer force of will and not a whole lot else.
Ah, Remus. You both needed a lot more hand-holding at this point!
They really did! I think that has a lot to do with how they each behave in HBP; they've just suffered a huge loss (Remus in particular, but arguably Tonks too), and then thanks to Remus's noble-prat act, they'll lose the support of each other's friendship right at the worst possible time. :(
Thanks so much for rereading -- at least this chapter was one that had some new content, heh.
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Date: 2013-08-20 02:41 am (UTC)Ah, Remus. You both needed a lot more hand-holding at this point!
They really did! I think that has a lot to do with how they each behave in HBP; they've just suffered a huge loss (Remus in particular, but arguably Tonks too), and then thanks to Remus's noble-prat act, they'll lose the support of each other's friendship right at the worst possible time. :(
Thanks so much for rereading -- at least this chapter was one that had some new content, heh.