Hi! Stereolightning pointed me to this as a great how-Remus-and-Tonks-first-met story; I arrived to find that I had indeed read it back in the day (under its old name), back when I was reading a bunch of Remus/Tonks, but too shy in fandom to leave comments...
So this time around I want to tell you how much I like this!
Your character interactions are so natural, your Tonks so cheerful and just very much herself. I also think you do a great job of incorporating those little Tonks-is-clumsy bits but without overdoing it; and how much do I LOVE the way Tonks falls for Remus when he smiles, how that smile transforms him?
And Remus asking Tonks to plan a prank on Sirius with him is just perfect – sets up the relationship between all three of them delightfully, and shows a Remus who's still got his sense of humor intact, which seems to me a very important part of his character!
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Date: 2013-11-24 09:37 pm (UTC)So this time around I want to tell you how much I like this!
Your character interactions are so natural, your Tonks so cheerful and just very much herself. I also think you do a great job of incorporating those little Tonks-is-clumsy bits but without overdoing it; and how much do I LOVE the way Tonks falls for Remus when he smiles, how that smile transforms him?
And Remus asking Tonks to plan a prank on Sirius with him is just perfect – sets up the relationship between all three of them delightfully, and shows a Remus who's still got his sense of humor intact, which seems to me a very important part of his character!