Aww, I'm so happy to know you like this enough to reread it. :)
(You may find the changes in the third scene to be more minor than what you were hoping for. I did try to do some of what you suggested, because I could see where it would be a good thing, but I'm also partly saving some development along those lines for the angstfest in the next chapter.)
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Date: 2009-07-17 07:12 pm (UTC)Aww, I'm so happy to know you like this enough to reread it. :)
(You may find the changes in the third scene to be more minor than what you were hoping for. I did try to do some of what you suggested, because I could see where it would be a good thing, but I'm also partly saving some development along those lines for the
angstfest in thenext chapter.)Thanks again for your most excellent suggestions.