I'm really liking this gen fic, sometimes you can get too shipper focused and it's nice to take a step back from that occasionally. I think you've really brought out the different characters really well. Sirius messing about with the kids seems really likely, given that he's just an overgrown kid himself really, and of course I loved Remus' stepping in with a "useful little spell" ;) I really like Bill's interaction with Remus, the idea Remus had done a secret code-breaking project for Gringotts is a fab idea and I think will be inserted into my own personal canon from now on! I like that Molly is still struggling with her interactions with both Sirius and Remus because I think it is only natural that she wouldn't take to them straight away. Most people can't put aside long held views that easily and I think she would struggle with it. But seeing how Remus is treated by the kids, Dumbledore and, I think especially, Bill would help with that.
That's all a bit of a rambly way of saying how much I'm enjoying this fic :) And despite what I said before about gen fic, I admit I am looking forward to the first glimpse of a certain Auror ;)
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Date: 2009-07-17 09:17 am (UTC)That's all a bit of a rambly way of saying how much I'm enjoying this fic :) And despite what I said before about gen fic, I admit I am looking forward to the first glimpse of a certain Auror ;)