[Kaleidoscope revision] Colours | 4. Stripes

Chapter 4 of Colours (the first "book" of Kaleidoscope) has been revised and is now up at FanFiction.net.

Kaleidoscope (I): Colours
4. Stripes (2710 words | PG)
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Sirius discovers that Tonks is unaware of something rather important about Remus, so he takes matters into his own hands.

• What has changed: This chapter needed to be brought in line with a plot point that has emerged in chapters 2 and 3 (which were written much later): Remus not being able to make himself tell Tonks about his furry little problem. There are small changes in the first and last scenes, and major changes in the third (the breakfast conversation), in order to make this aspect of the story more consistent.

( Sirius sat slouched in a corner of the kitchen... )

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