Thanks very much for the detailed comments; I'm happy to hear you liked the parallels in the story and found dy Ferrej's perspective plausible.
(By the way, I have a personal rule that I can't read Vorkosigan fic yet -- I'm only up to Memory and I'm trying not to get (too) spoiled. But I wanted to let you know that I see you posting lots of really interesting-looking things, and I hope to be able to read them someday!)
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(By the way, I have a personal rule that I can't read Vorkosigan fic yet -- I'm only up to Memory and I'm trying not to get (too) spoiled. But I wanted to let you know that I see you posting lots of really interesting-looking things, and I hope to be able to read them someday!)