ext_75074 ([identity profile] mrstater.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] shimotsuki 2009-03-24 12:36 pm (UTC)

What a treat this was to wake up to! That scene at the baths is so painful to read, so it's nice to see Caz get his name cleared even in this (and to see Gomo learn about not making judgments).

You've made Gomo so endearing with the way he gawks at all the noblemen and women in Valenda, and wanting to see his teen idol Bergon. ;) And I had to laugh at him fearing Caz would throw him in the dungeon and shut down the baths, lol.

Really good job. Hope you find more snatches of writing time!

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