I just finished Chalion yesterday, so you posted this with perfect timing for me!
It was perfectly Caz and Betriz. I loved how you linked back to their swimming lessons with his thought of how she looked in the shift and also his uncertainty about his own body. And Betriz is just adorable. I loved Chalion for how both her and Iselle were strong females whilst still being in synch with their more male-focused world (does that make sense??) Anyway, you strike that balance perfectly here.
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I just finished Chalion yesterday, so you posted this with perfect timing for me!
It was perfectly Caz and Betriz. I loved how you linked back to their swimming lessons with his thought of how she looked in the shift and also his uncertainty about his own body. And Betriz is just adorable. I loved Chalion for how both her and Iselle were strong females whilst still being in synch with their more male-focused world (does that make sense??) Anyway, you strike that balance perfectly here.